Who cares about rotten typing. Great analysis.
You should be proud of your writing. It reminds me of Hemingway, who spent many of his formative years in your home state of Michigan.
Hemingway said if something was written "truly", it would "let the boys yip", and
the noise would have "that pleasant sound coyotes make on a very cold night..."
Its time OGXI let the boys yip...and women too (I'm sure Hemingway meant to include them too).